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Another Poem, What Do You Think Of It?

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Written just now :D
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Splash of blue,
Curtains of gray,
Breeze that breathes feathers away,
Down the isle,
walked on the side,
little children and snow white bride,
Petals of roses,
Soft drops of rain,
Such blessing these lovers attain,
A golden paint,
On morning sky,
Gently on the clouds they lie,
White wings,
Soft hymns,
Every word in their speech rhymes,
Every image,
And every sound,
Sums up such beauty profound.

  1. Anonymous Says

    i love it darlin..read mine i’m not a poet i’m a writer but i done this because of you..you made me feel like bein a little poetic..
    let me know feel free to swear

  2. Anonymous Says

    I think you have captured a breath of awe.
    The assonance in the first stanza is lovely, and I like the rhythm, but I’m a bit of a purist so I think the last two stanzas need work!
    It’s a lovely start.

  3. محمد يحب نعيمة Says

    -_-……..yup, everyone’s writing poems today…………

  4. happy2he Says

    very very nice

  5. N0UB Says

    LOOOOOOOOOOL @ First answerer – HAAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

  6. Olive Green Says

    This poem reminds me of what Allah created.
    :)
    So…
    It’s brilliant!!!

  7. Anonymous Says

    did u just barf this out?

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