Written just now ![]()
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Splash of blue,
Curtains of gray,
Breeze that breathes feathers away,
Down the isle,
walked on the side,
little children and snow white bride,
Petals of roses,
Soft drops of rain,
Such blessing these lovers attain,
A golden paint,
On morning sky,
Gently on the clouds they lie,
White wings,
Soft hymns,
Every word in their speech rhymes,
Every image,
And every sound,
Sums up such beauty profound.


i love it darlin..read mine i’m not a poet i’m a writer but i done this because of you..you made me feel like bein a little poetic..
let me know feel free to swear
I think you have captured a breath of awe.
The assonance in the first stanza is lovely, and I like the rhythm, but I’m a bit of a purist so I think the last two stanzas need work!
It’s a lovely start.
-_-……..yup, everyone’s writing poems today…………
very very nice
LOOOOOOOOOOL @ First answerer – HAAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
This poem reminds me of what Allah created.

So…
It’s brilliant!!!
did u just barf this out?